It looks great but I feel like the left arm (her left) should be a bit longer? I also feel like her forearm is longer than her upper arm. Could you also add strings to the guitar? c: Otherwise it looks great and I have sent payment!!I made the change and added strings to the guitar: https://i.gyazo.com/ac589e70de388a3cc3578b011632d127.png
XD Close! AH I FEEL SO BAD QQ I'm so sorry for all this confusionohhh
Just like this: http://i.imgur.com/S9Xz76u.png
..no problem lol ^^ I probably misread the post and flip flopped the two
Sorry for the confusion, I meant both parts: http://i.imgur.com/9udIKU8.pngI removed the leather part: https://i.gyazo.com/b12a1ea580427e798b48b00d3e7f1ea7.png
You can leave out the leather part here on that arm: http://i.imgur.com/q7gbL6U.png
It's a bit awkward for the stance, so I think it'll look better without
Thank you so much for the other changes, everything looks great!
Ahhhh, I really love your lineart; it is beautiful *w*I made the changes that you wanted, hopefully: https://i.gyazo.com/c01d1d3757bd129424fdde7561188b45.png
I do have a few minor changes if you don't mind!
•The lines here: http://i.imgur.com/g07xMGC.png are not needed, it was just a line from messy sketch
•Can you add the metal parts on the sleeve reaching for her hair?
•Her eyes feel a bit off (specifically right one from our perspective; her left)
•Can you add the leather strap from the diamond around neck?
I'll be logging in here soon to send payment!
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Payment has been sent o3o/